Saturday, 17 January 2015

Sleep scene

In our plot we wrote that we will have a scene that shows Ruby and Sam's friendship and Jeremy and Spencer's friendship. So we created a scene to show just that, after we agree to let James in we are sent to bed due to curfew so we all lie on the floor, then after a moment Spencer wakes Jeremy up and the talk about the girls they like and show a bond between them. Spencer then leaves to use the toilet and that is when Sam wakes up and talks to Ruby about the fact that Ruby has a crush on someone and they show a bond there. To be honest, I don't really like this scene because it seems really boring and Ashley, Dom and I are just lying on stage with no point. The conversations seem really dry with nothing that interesting happening, so I think we can either write a script with a better conversation on it or change the idea completely.

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