Opening

We want to open with a monologue (voiced by me) played into the room giving context to what the future looks like and explain how Jamie took control and what is happening. We then created a soundscape to show our first mission and to get the story started. (link here to see the opening) I feel that the basic idea looks good but we need to work on timing and our characters, I think that if I say something like "it's all clear, Jeremy do your thing" then Toby enters it will look better, and if Dom says something like "Sector One cameras are down, good job team" so the audience understands what is happening. I also think we need more reaction to hear that our activities are being noticed like Freya turning to Dom and saying "Tim can you work on deleting all video evidence of us in Jamie's Media network. Spencer, Take a message to all our informants, telling them to lay low until we give the all clear. Ruby, go topside make sure this punk wasn't followed here. Craig, check social media, find out how famous we've become."